środa, 5 grudnia 2012

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Katerina Hitruhhina
I have picked your essay because I did not understand the subject from our course blog, unfortunately, I did not get what I would expect from this kind of essay: not pure demagogy and quotes from scholars but existing examples that can picture the theory and show applicability of theory to practice.

taavi123
Wow, you fully caught my attention and I am waiting for more… I liked your approach: real example that can be supported (or not) by the plain theory which is not so obvious for others to do. I would also hope for some critical approach at the end that will show the complexity of social newtorking (e.g. Do FB likes really change something?) but overall idea for an essay is really interesting and I would like to read some more.

sutermae
Interesting subject to develop however I am missing real life examples to show how it looks like on the daily basis. If i were you I would also try to find at least one academical source because as for now your essay is based on researches only and I would add some articles describing this issue.

Dagmar Mae:
Interesting subject to write about. I liked the theory backing the reality but maybe it would be beneficial also to look critically at the issue of spread story (requires more engagement in collecting pieces, question of how and whether to use UGC, switching the consumer to prosumer: pros and cons, etc.). 

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